I think the title may be causing the downvotes, the first part of it sounds like a confirmation/ exposé rather than a personal analysis by the OP, which isn’t necessarily a bad thing but might be misleading at first glance
Something like this might have done better
I didn’t like how Mark Carney behaved at the stampede, and so I looked at the clip carefully to pick out a few points that may extend to how he treats the people around him
Note: I haven’t had a chance to read the article yet, I’m hypothesizing based on the comment section on why people didn’t like it
I think the title may be causing the downvotes, the first part of it sounds like a confirmation/ exposé rather than a personal analysis by the OP, which isn’t necessarily a bad thing but might be misleading at first glance
Something like this might have done better
Note: I haven’t had a chance to read the article yet, I’m hypothesizing based on the comment section on why people didn’t like it
If you do end up reading it, I’d love to hear what you think :)
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