You might think that this review of Yud’s glowfic is an occasion for a “read a second book” response:

Yudkowsky is good at writing intelligent characters in a specific way that I haven’t seen anyone else do as well.

But actually, the word intelligent is being used here in a specialized sense to mean “insufferable”.

Take a stereotypical fantasy novel, a textbook on mathematical logic, and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Ah, the book that isn’t actually about kink, but rather an abusive relationship disguised as kink — which would be a great premise for an erotic thriller, except that the author wasn’t sufficiently self-aware to know that’s what she was writing.