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minus-squareDrElementary@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up34arrow-down1·1 year agoIs anyone else bothered by the addition of the word “just”, which throws off the whole rhythm and doesn’t need to be there in any way?
minus-squareEtterra@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up4·1 year agoIt works if you pronounce the last word as three syllables. I don’t know if that’s the correct way to pronounce it, but it is the American way to pronounce it.
minus-squareDrElementary@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up5·1 year ago“I’m a bitch” 3 syllables “I’m an orca” 4 syllables “Sinking yachts” 3 syllables “Off Majorca” 4 syllables Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
minus-squaresamus12345@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·1 year agoAlso, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
minus-squaresamus12345@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·1 year agoIt’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.
minus-squareslackassassin@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up3·1 year agoNaw, the line should only be 4 syllables. “I’m a mother” is the og.
minus-squarebitwaba@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·1 year agoI’d imagine whoever wrote this doesn’t know how to pronounce Majorca
minus-squareThe Assman@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up1·1 year agoI know how that’s my favorite Zelda game
minus-squarebitwaba@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up2·11 months agoI smoked majorka’s ass once. GUD SHIT
Is anyone else bothered by the addition of the word “just”, which throws off the whole rhythm and doesn’t need to be there in any way?
It works if you pronounce the last word as three syllables. I don’t know if that’s the correct way to pronounce it, but it is the American way to pronounce it.
“I’m a bitch”
3 syllables
“I’m an orca”
4 syllables
“Sinking yachts”
3 syllables
“Off Majorca”
4 syllables
Adding “Just” makes it 5, which is too many for the pattern
Also, “Imma hit you with my tail” is one syllable too many. “I’ll” would work better.
5 works just fine.
It’s awkward, especially since the “just” is completely unnecessary.
Naw, the line should only be 4 syllables. “I’m a mother” is the og.
I’d imagine whoever wrote this doesn’t know how to pronounce Majorca
I know how that’s my favorite Zelda game
I smoked majorka’s ass once.
GUD SHIT