• thespcicifcocean@lemmy.world
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    3 hours ago

    To reword the OP, “All my good faith had no effect on the outcome.”

    sometimes when telling a story you want to have a different voice, active voice versus passive voice or something. “All the good faith I’d had” hits different than “All my good faith”

    there’s better ways to word this though, while being able to keep the same tone