Great work! But I still give you a proper “critique” for the sake of it. Your force shortening is on point!! Some good drama in the camera angle you’ve achieved! Only thing I’d maybe say this particular piece could benefit from, completely outside of your execution and ability, is some contrast to make the figure pop a bit. That could be slightly more line weight? Could be some shading to get the silhouette to pop a bit more. Just something to get the figure a bit more clearly defined among the colors. Seriously great work though. Like I said the overall composition and pose of the figure is wonderful!
EDIT: oh forgot to mention the negative space for the sneakers and phone does a good job of making those items pop. Could maybe try to play with that for more of the figure??
Great work! But I still give you a proper “critique” for the sake of it. Your force shortening is on point!! Some good drama in the camera angle you’ve achieved! Only thing I’d maybe say this particular piece could benefit from, completely outside of your execution and ability, is some contrast to make the figure pop a bit. That could be slightly more line weight? Could be some shading to get the silhouette to pop a bit more. Just something to get the figure a bit more clearly defined among the colors. Seriously great work though. Like I said the overall composition and pose of the figure is wonderful!
EDIT: oh forgot to mention the negative space for the sneakers and phone does a good job of making those items pop. Could maybe try to play with that for more of the figure??
Thanks. I do like the idea of playing more with negative space