• runswithjedi@lemmy.world
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    1 year ago

    Try dropping the parentheses and adding periods, fixing capitalization, etc. If it still makes sense as a complete thought, leave it as a sentence. If it doesn’t, remove it.

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      1 year ago

      Alternatively, if you really want to have some fun, and I’m not saying you don’t, you could instead, if you were so inclined, just use commas to separate, but not entirely exclude, nonrestrictive clauses.